autumn forest
100 Word Challenge
In through the autumn forest. There were 5 Golden lights, floating around me I wondered, Maybe I did something good? Maybe its Fairy’s? I wondered again, Nothing good came. I was searching if there were something else Interesting, I saw a lovely view. There were lots of golden lights. I tried to count them but there were too much. I didn't care I just counted. I stopped up to 100 But there were still more Golden Lights! I sat in a rock feeling exhausted from counting the golden lights, I thought If there Magicians,Wizards, But I don’t know yet.
I like the way you have added detail. You said... "I wondered, Maybe I did something good? Maybe there Fairy’s? I wondered again, Nothing good came." Here you tell us two ways that you wondered about what was happening.
ReplyDeleteHi Sana,
ReplyDeleteNice work,good detail. Maybe you could fix up this sentence, 'Maybe there Fairy’s?' re- read it and check it makes sense
Thanks Alice for the sentence I need to change (ʘ‿ʘ)
DeleteHi Sana,
ReplyDeleteI like your story sana
Thank you, I really appreciate it.
DeleteI really like your story but maybe instead of I stopped up to 100 maybe write I stopped at 100 but you don't have to:)
ReplyDeletethat would rather be at 99.
DeleteHello Sana,
ReplyDeleteGreat work. I like your story. well done
Sincerely Suhayra
thanks Suhayra
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